Critique 2
Kenlie Cerull:
I like how there is a sequence to all of the sounds. There is a huge variety, and it changes back and forth, but there are still consistencies within the whole piece.
I think there could be a little more repetition of the first sound to make have a fullness to it.
Becky Harkin:
I like the repetitive bird noises throughout the piece. It sounds like we are actually in nature even with all the other noises around us.
I think that the theme could be more clear if there were more nature noises in it instead of household noises.
Sophia Abiezzi:
I like the intro and how it sounds very calming. I also find joy in the laughing of the people and the baby.
I think the part where the sound flatlines would’ve been a really good sound to put at the end.
Lily Jenkins:
I like the consistency with all the clicking and typing noises.
I think there could be more variation within the sounds, but I still like it how it is.
Simon Sprenger:
I like how there is basically a visual when I hear this. First im outside listening to the chirps in birds and then I walk inside and fill up my water bottle and so on so forth.
I think the segment with the typing noises could’ve been a little shorter and had more variation in sounds.
Me
Ari:
I really like the beginning where there is music playing but then it sounds like it malfunctions and shuts down.
I think that there could be less silence within the piece. The time between some of the sounds is a little long.
Baxter Miller:
I like how there is chatter in the piece. It gives you the illusion that you are with people. I also like how some of the sounds are overlapping and have effects.
I think that keeping the chatter present would be awesome.
Colin Donovan:
I like the intro where it sounds like your running from something, and how overall its kind of scary. I don’t think there’s anything I would do differently with this one, it literally puts you in the scene.